
Sharing how I use copywriting and product marketing content to help SaaS companies grow Β· Clients:@brightlocal, @mockuuups, @mailmeteor, @veedstudio & 20+ more
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If you're a SaaS company with web pages, landing pages, and emails that could be working harder for you...
Shoot me a DM - I'd love to chat.
Here's a video of what @damonchen from @testimonialto has to say about working with me:
Anyone else feel slightly pissed off when you get an email that's clearly an AI reply?
I understand if English is not your native language...
But come on man.
Some stuff you gotta sit down, think out, and write.
Makes me extremely demotivated to continue the conversation.
Was talking to a client today who said:
βCustomers are upgradingβ¦ but I donβt know why.β
This founder runs a horizontal email marketing platform.
Clients could upgrade for loads of reasons β
to send more emails,
unlock automations,
The list goes on.
Now, upgrades are great.
But if somethingβs happening, thereβs usually an 80/20 reason behind it.
And if we donβt know what that is, we canβt, as marketers, double down on it.
So how do we find out?
My suggestion:
On the upgrade confirmation page, show a full-screen pop-up that asks:
βWhat was going on in your life that made you upgrade today?β
Itβs simple, but it surfaces gold we can use to double down in our upgrade messaging.
IMO, it's now more important than ever for SaaS companies to invest in building relationships with their users.
They can copy your features...
They can low-ball your pricing...
But they can't copy the relationship you have built with your customers.
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Harry Lawson | SaaS Copywriter retweeted
Had a blast helping @earthlingworks and the team at SignWell sharpen their onboarding last year.
Great to circle back to see how things are today πͺ
The biggest win of having me join your team is saying
"hey, we wanna start sending emails to nurture these leads"
And I can say, "sure, leave it with me"
Absolutely no hand holding.
Consider it shipped π«‘
Had a blast helping @earthlingworks and the team at SignWell sharpen their onboarding last year.
Great to circle back to see how things are today πͺ
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Harry Lawson | SaaS Copywriter retweeted
I've come to realize that the 80/20 of SaaS homepage success comes down to how well you can answer these 2 questions:
π What problem does your product solve?
π Why is it the obvious choice for a certain type of person vs. others in the category?
It sounds simple.
I sunsetted landing page reviews over a year ago.
But last week @DomKent asked me if it was possible to review a page for a client π
Soβ¦ Iβm bringing it back.
If you want to improve your landing page but donβt know where to start, book a review and Iβll show you how.
I've come to realize that the 80/20 of SaaS homepage success comes down to how well you can answer these 2 questions:
π What problem does your product solve?
π Why is it the obvious choice for a certain type of person vs. others in the category?
It sounds simple.
Your homepage is 90% about guiding people through this internal dialogue:
π Does this product solve what Iβm struggling with?
π Is it better than others in the category?
π Why is this the obvious choice for my outcome?
Do this for your prospect on your homepage and you win
Proud to see @brightlocal still running this narrative we developed for their homepage 2 years on:
Any nomad founders in South West coast of Costa Rica?
Headed in a couple of months.
Would love to know how you've found it.
Last year I offered homepage reviews for foundersβshowing them how to boost conversions with the same playbook I use to create pages for clients paying me $5K/mo
Last week, someone asked me to bring it back. I sent him the Stripe link
His response?π
Thinking of offering again
Does anyone know of a SaaS company that shows a different version of the homepage to returning users?
I'm not talking about a re-route to the dashboard or login page. I'm talking about a homepage variation shown.
TIA
Most founders obsess over active deals.
And ignore the βdeadβ ones.
Want to revive your pipeline?
Send this 9-word email to leads who ghosted 90+ days ago:
βAre you still interested in [problem you solve]?β
Iβve closed $30K+ this year from leads who went dark 1+ year ago.
What would you do with 250,000+ monthly visitors?
A SaaS client of mine had the same questionβ¦
Hereβs what we did π
Hereβs what we did:
β‘οΈ Designed a lead magnet to capture & nurture potential users.
β‘οΈ Optimized blog UX for conversion.
β‘οΈ Targeted solution-aware keywords.



